Your Stare.

       Your Stare

 

 

Your torturous tormenting stare,

Burning deep dismal holes into my eyes.

Taking breaths gets awkward and difficult.

 

Your excruciating deplorable stare,

Making my every move uncomfortable and cramped.

Looking at you is hard, un-easy.

 

Your disgusting furtive stare,

Holding my anxious afraid eyes.

 

Walking away is simple, scary, but simple.

 

 

Reviews

[StacyPerry]

I have learned over the 35 years of breathing that nothing is simple.....BUT your writing was something that made me feel like something in this world actually could be.

Nice write.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

haunting and compelling~ much like a dagger driven deep that gaze you describe so sharply~ powerful~ poignant poetic~

[Seerose]

Scary and beautiful. A situation that we all know. Good ending. :)

[TeenRomance2]

Wow, that's a very strong poem. I like the words you chose to express yourself.