Wedding Night

We laugh about it to this day.

I knew we were true love happy 

when you let me babble on,

after the wedding and in the car

driving to the honeymoon,

my dress and our laughter 

filling the cab.

And later it showed even more

When, 42 bobby pins and the

maze-like contraption that was

the wedding dress

was removed,

and since I was tired

and full of champagne

you said, "I'll put you to bed"and I fell right to sleep.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

Short but satirical. However, I suggest you improve the first line to make it grammatically correct and easier to understand. You have a unique concept here.

Keep Writing. ^___^