Seduced

Seduced

A Poem by Penulis Kecil
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My first haiku since childhood (inspired by Poeticadia and ice).

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Raw, deep, and honest,

my first love was a poem.

I dream you the same.

© 2011 Penulis Kecil


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Penulis Kecil
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yes it should have been
more...haikus are difficult
but you did just fine

hehe

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful reminder of how poetry comes from the heart and appeals to the heart. Your haiku reminds me of a quote by Carol Ann Duffy (British Poet Laureate): "All poems are love poems because all poems are a gift."

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 8, 2011
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Penulis Kecil
Penulis Kecil

Caboolture, Australia



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I'm a 29 year old Australian woman who has, like most people, experienced a number of things in life. I think I'm pretty friendly, if a little odd and silly. When I'm not writing, I enjoy other cre.. more..

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