Scenery

This one was inspired by the scenery outside my window as I flashed past on a train bound from Manchester to Exeter.

Bags of hay in rolls
litter fields untouched by time;
cows watch, uninterested.

Author's Note

All polite/relevant reviews are welcome - especially constructive critique, but also including grammar and spelling corrections. And thank you for reading/leaving a review!

Reviews

[BlueLagoon]

Hello! Nice haiku. I am sorry though for doing a disservice to you because there really is nothing to correct here. I'm just here to say great piece; it was short and sweet. Oh and let me congratulate you on making me smirk over that one bit about the cows. Cows are just so dense sometimes.