crystal clear of a broken vase

good morning

prompt were wrestling words
like large and violent herds

rabid tongue drips blasphemous distilling
complete came w****s the typical villain

truth the shepherd
narratives entwine
softly mumbled urges
what will never be mine

moments away wretched in dirty grasses
sheep of men hold torrid masses

quick lashed were sermons unjust
said the prophet bleeding desired lust

unto me swift deathly grip
conjured lest hunger under chewy nip


forlorn the infant pictures-less text
of centuries old deceit dressed in a saviors jest

Reviews

[Seriana]

I'm always left scratching my head when I first read a piece of yours. I enjoyed the harsh nature of your chosen words. Txt wars, perhaps. I enjoy pieces that urge personal interpretation. This is just that. Nice work!

[Periac]

If you scratched your head then my dear I have succeeded
Thank you for the review as always I love to hear your thoughts !
While the initial write was more so another dig on religion
you brought up an image of text wars and holy hell doesn’t that fit
thank you !!