ache

ache
but an ache of loneliness
of fluid words bouncing from hearts bonded
an ache of broken dreams
of a disappearing destiny

are we made to endure such ?
i wonder

questioning decisions laden with consequence
we are after all sharing pain still

oh but my mind the fiend!
frail and forlorn
tender in turmoil

when did this humility dress in burden ?

as parts of me cower
shiver on the rebuild
again

we are after all sharing pain still

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

You captured so well what I heard another writer recently describe as the reality and necessity of suffering. It's what we must endure as humans (failure, sickness, death, etc.). Yet, we have that human spirit, something we know as hope that drives us to "rebuild"... and we do it together. A good piece and fitting title. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Periac]

Thank you for the review....I suppose it’s at these times we are most open ..

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Very good poem and ached with your words.

[Seriana]

From the picture to the title and the phrases. It's all here, dear one. I know this piece. Know it from within, as do you. It is a shared ache.
This part...
"as parts of me cower
shiver on the rebuild
again "
It is where I am stuck. When I read your pieces, small snippets like this are scenes from the movies of life. Real, deleted scenes that most never will see. But there they are, non-the-less. REAL. Love this P....

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Yes I feel this- were we made to endure so much? So many unanswered questions- I wonder about this a lot- I believe it’s good to question and search too few do it- great words, love it🌹

[McEltic]

A long road until the end is insight... enjoyed