wake

wake child
for your dreams are cursed under the covers
run rabbit cloaked

evil cringes this night
as stars twinkle in sight

wake child
another day comes on the morrow

a day without a sock wearing moon
a day with a butterflie's tune

wake child

for your dreams tonight can be tommorrows gold
if you stand up strong and look up bold

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I'm glad you won the Insomnia Contest!

[Periac]

i actually just notcied that i think the boy in the picture has something popping out in the morning

[lilain]

I still fear the monster beneath my bed, but I'm trying really hard to ignore him. Maybe if I heed your words, I'll overcome that silly fear...

This is such an insightful message. You're right. Dreams are a gift which can bring such happiness... if only we let them.

[Seriana]

Oh yay!!!! *claps*
Wonderfully done. This was a nice angle you approached this one from! I love it. :)

[kurrupted]

wow, very deep and thought provoking, lovely,very lovely piece, and very inspiring.
such a great read too, this should be on the notice board of some schools as a kind of morale boosting, so inspiring the theme.
thanks for sharing this and i must add the picture really is an add up.
the shortness of the poem and the conciseness really also add up to the coolness of this piece.