The Silence of others

This is more of a tragic verse. Like after a disaster of some kind.

The Silence of others,

The sisters,and brothers.

Together at the grave.

No one there to save.

Earth is lightly dropped in.

The game of original sin.

Rain starts to fall.

Is this the sum of it all?

Reviews

[Autumn Lyric]

there is heavy weight of silence on the world after a disaster and this piece captures it with a solemn grace...Thank you for sharing this...

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poetry. I like the poetry that make you think and ponder. This poem did.
"Rain starts to fall.
Is this the sum of it all?"
I liked how you led to the very good ending. I lied the poetry that leave the reader with a question. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote