the you within you

i felt like simply writing a simple poem :)

deep within you 

there  is a balance that makes you  ,"you".

don't give up on finding yourself within "yourself"

scream to the anti you that "this is not you!"

eradicate the malevolent you 

that seeks to the destroy the benevolent you

stand up and fight the ,"anti yous",  for that is 

the only way to find the you within "you".

Author's Note

hmmmmmm , review away :)

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Interesting write and alot of wisdom in it...Rose

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Inspiring one, Peter. Short but the lesson is there: finding oneself.

Well, I also believe in Johari's Windows: (1) I know others know, (2) I know, others don't know, (3) I don't know, others know, (4) I don't know, others don't know. Your poem, perhaps included in the 3rd or 4th windows wherein some things about yourself is unknown to you. Sometimes we need others to reveal and/or find who we are in this world.

Great!

[Peter H]

insightfuli will research thisthank you dhaye

[Peter H]

Interesting piece here Peter! I love it. Nicely worded! :)

[Peter H]

thank you :)

[Tree]

Deep, beautiful advice. I hope the intended heard this, I certainly did.

Nice piece, PH

[Peter H]

thank you diego :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Conflict between ego and spirit. Good read and write.

[Peter H]

thank you brandon :)

[lovejulez03]

Short and sweet and far from emotionless. I suppose the only word I can use is brave? Although I don't even see that as the right word, but hopefully you know what I'm trying to say, since my brain isn't functioning correctly this evening. You found a way to put into words what many say or wish to say, yet you do it in a poem and it's smooth on the eyes, meaningful on the mind and the heart and puts a smile on my face. Love it :)

[Peter H]

thank you very much julez :)

[Baby Ricochet]

That's some sage advice.

[Peter H]

thank you bro

[quinfinn]

sensing some inner conflict and personal turmoil here. this touches deeply and resonates with strong emotion. well penned.

[Peter H]

quinfin i thank you again your reviews are always astute and insightful :)

[quinfinn]

welcome!

[Archangel Gabriel]

Another sage piece of writing Peter. Reads well and has a clear message.

[Peter H]

thank you very much arch angel gabriel :) i appreciate the review :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Awesome write... this speaks to the duality in every reader. My intrigue of heros and villains, causes me to contemplate this very subject. Very well done! One for my library.

[Peter H]

thank you very much dear friend :)