The Turning

My first Haiku

                                             This world, a scary place.

                               Filled with monsters, whom I eagerly embrace,

                                     Crouching, eating my girlfriends face.

Reviews

[Kesch (Finding Julia)]

wow, that's graphic but good. enjoyed

[Tony Jordan]

Hey Hannibal the Haikubal is here!
Just kidding.
It has to be the antithesis of what haikus were meant for but d****t it's class!!

[Bare trees]

This is certainly what I would call unique. lol

[Pete]

Thanks. What I lack in skill I try to make up for in originality :-) And it's usually dark lol.

[Zahra]

Oh my God! :D Good one! ....