Chapter 2 Ariya’s first ride

Chapter 2
Ariya’s first ride

the dragon grew quickly and Ariya still couldn’t find a name. she chose gem and jewel when it finally struck her “Amethist” she said.
I like it
Ariya knew it was the dragon. She was o.k. with the openness because she was surrounded by the forestlands and has lived there all her life. The only civilized people she has been around where Brom,Roran,Eragon and some woman with the same name as her. Amethist was now big enough to ride but Ariya never thought about fling or that she was a dragon rider for she knew nothing of dragon riders. Ariya lay on Amethist’s back “Amethist” Saphira said with a wink. Amethist went to a cliff and said
Ariya hold on
Ariya shifted to a sitting passion
Why am I -
Just hold on
Then Amethist took off. They flew over lakes and mountains the air was cold and thou it was a trait from her mother she was not afraid of the height. When they landed it was the most dark, creepy and spooky “where are we”? Ariya asked
The spine Amethist spat with anger
A wall almost blocked Ariya from Amethist’s thoughts but she broke through. “archers” yelled a woman four archers pointed arrows at Ariya ignoring Amethist’s presents “who are you and why are you hear” she asked “I came hear unintentionally” Ariya answered “unintentionally?” said the woman “I don’t recall that word” “woman don’t you have a dictionary” Ariya said “Ariya they haven’t invented dictionaries yet” Amethist said “still who are-” “oh you want a name I’m Ariya” she said. “Ariya? Archers fire” the woman yelled Ariya unsheathed her sword Eragon gave it to her he called it Zar’roc. The rage of her mothers abandonment filled her mind and she went into a fitting passion with her fingers on the blade as it glowed. “Brisinger” Ariya yelled as she swung the blade and the arrows to ash. Ariya blinked “o.k. then girl come with me” the woman said Ariya fainted. Meanwhile Brom and Roran where visiting “ I need to take care of something” Brom said “so soon” Eragon said “I’ll be staying for awhile“ Roran said “ I wanted you to be hear when Ariya and Amethist get back” Eragon said.

Reviews

[ApplesAreAmazing]

What do you mean when you said "she chose gem and jewel." "Amethist" is supposed to be spelled "Amethyst". What is a dragon rider? Did she travel back in time or something?

[phantomcristal]

no no Amethist was intended and read eragon, no she dose not travel through time

[ApplesAreAmazing]

Oh.....okay.

[phantomcristal]

oh okay ? the reply is a little boring

[ApplesAreAmazing]

Well in my inbox you said "..."

[phantomcristal]

um. . .

[tuvi]

did u mean " Amethyst " or was it an intended " Amethist " ??

this part of the storyA wall almost blocked Ariya from Amethist’s thoughts but she broke through. “archers” yelled a woman four archers pointed arrows at Ariya ignoring Amethist’s presents “who are you and why are you hear” she asked “I came hear unintentionally” Ariya answered “unintentionally?” said the woman “I don’t recall that word” “woman don’t you have a dictionary” Ariya said “Ariya they haven’t invented dictionaries yet” Amethist said “still who are-” “oh you want a name I’m Ariya” she said. “Ariya? Archers fire” the woman yelled Ariya unsheathed her sword Eragon gave it to her he called it Zar’roc. The rage of her mothers abandonment filled her mind and she went into a fitting passion with her fingers on the blade as it glowed. “Brisinger” Ariya yelled as she swung the blade and the arrows to ash. Ariya blinked “o.k. then girl come with me” the woman said Ariya fainted. Meanwhile Brom and Roran where visiting “ I need to take care of something” Brom said “so soon” Eragon said “I’ll be staying for awhile“ Roran said “ I wanted you to be hear when Ariya and Amethist get back” Eragon said. was really nice : " ..................

Keep up ...you are doing an excellent job ...

Regards,
Tuvi :D

"

[phantomcristal]

the spelling of " Amethist" was intended

[tuvi]

cool ... good work

[phantomcristal]

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA