chapter 3 she unnown

chapter 3 she unnown

A Chapter by phantomcristal

Ariya is walking around in a forest. a woman about her age says "Ariya" the girl turns around
and runs away looking back every now and then. "Ariya" she said again only louder "ARIYA" she
 yelled. Ariya woke up to see Amethist staring at her. the woman came in "your awake" she said and sat on a stool by Ariya as she sat up. "take it easy using magic used alot of your strangth"
Amethist rolled her eyes
Ariya oviesly she is trying to trick -
"quiet dragon" the woman ordered "who are you" Ariya asked "and whats magic"

p.s. sorry tuvi still writing.


© 2013 phantomcristal


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phantomcristal
tuvi still writing

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This is a really short chapter for you....Are you still writing it? Ariya used magic? "Strangth" is supposed to be spelled "Strength." I think you were trying to spell "obviously" but you spelled it "oviesly". Update soon!

Posted 10 Years Ago


phantomcristal

10 Years Ago

im not done with the chapter
ApplesAreAmazing

10 Years Ago

Oh, okay. Write more soon, please!
phantomcristal

10 Years Ago

kay kay ...
:P waiting in for the rest ...

Amethist staring at Ariya........and Tuvi staring at the chapter in a whimsical manner for further ... story line to develop ;) :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

phantomcristal

10 Years Ago

hope you will enjoiy the rest ... when i write it

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phantomcristal
phantomcristal

New Meteli, IA



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i am 15 and female but some people may say i am weird i love to write and watch anime, fantasy is my genre.and unless you beg me all the time I probably won't finish any started books. more..

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