Cool, Clear Night

Cool, Clear Night

A Poem by pheasant
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my first poem

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I stand here thinking on a cool, clear night
Admiring the stars with a thing called sight
I stand among people on a planet called Earth
Looking out at the heavens for a new sense of worth

© 2011 pheasant


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Author's Note

pheasant
This is one of my first pieces done while contemplating the night sky several years ago... in one of the chilliest parts of the country... Minnesota.

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As I read this I was thinking how we take so many things for granted.. like sight.
The poem is short and sweet as some have said ... but the poem has a meaning and a lesson.. plus it has a cool clear night filled with stars.. stars are a little magical to me.. wishing upon a star, ect. Sounds like a beautiful place to look at stars.
We all inhabit this Earth and we should always look for a new sense of worth.


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now THAT is beautiful .... trust me I feel what you say , I am a sky-watcher myself .
A SUPERB WRITE.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last line made this such a strong piece! it's short and concise, very easy to read and has a nice flow to it.
Such a simple thing put into simple words, but with a big meaning behind it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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