Let It Rip

Let It Rip

A Poem by pheasant

We're going to get into this meaty grind
We're going to get back to this place we shine
We're going to move this place and we know why
We're going to step right up to clarify

Along this master making plan
A tall tale told is where we stand
We're calling out the human race
And chasing that old shadowed face

We look out to the deepest skies
Open our doors, and fix our eyes
Outward, inward, get a grip
Skip right over, let it rip



© 2011 pheasant



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Author's Note

pheasant
Isn't it about time we kick ourselves into high gear?

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YES IT IS, fantastic write my friend fantastic!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was pleasent mr Pheasent
Pumped adrenalin
And got me high!

Love it!! Makes me want to go sky diving! Always did want to jump out of a perfectly good aircraft (edited to include hellicopters)! what a rush!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is time to act...we need to stand together. I like the line about looking into the "deepest skies", makes me imagine looking into the sky and also looking deep within.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very upbeat!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It has been about that time for awhile.We hit the snooze button too many times. This poem is really motivating.Very good flow to also and the message is just exactly what we should do .. I like this very much.

Chloe

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I cherish your attitude of uniting. It takes time it will occur. Slowly but surely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

such a great picture...this poems rips with enthusiasm...very inspirational..nicely done...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inspiration! I like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 26, 2011
Last Updated on March 3, 2011

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pheasant
pheasant

Santa Rosa, CA



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