them late nights

pretty much what the title suggests. i love them alot. but i tried to mess around with imagery a bit here.

The moon. It serenades my bedroom, with its presence, its grace. Capturing my thoughts just like it did with my gaze. My house, my home. Silent with the darkness. Cold from winters rage, creeping up on my skin. Yet I continue, to lean on my window looking at the sky, like a widow clutching her proudest memories. I love them late nights, drifting in-between worlds, where I can feel my spirit escape and dance as the moon looks on. 

Author's Note

its my first time focusing on imagery a lot. would appreciate the pointers on how to improve :)

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

Great imagery, it's practically enchanting and is totaly amazing. That feeling of floating and drifting is so well put into woirds it's amazing!

[Charlotte Haran]

I read this aloud to my brother, sounds magical.

[no sun]

What a great poem. Very descriptive and artistic. The style does not do the poem justice. Consider breaking up the paragraph into stanzas. Sometimes the visual of the words or lack of deters readers from reading it.

[Chrishauna Thompson]

I like this poem because its imaginary but yet you can relate to it.! This is the kinda poem when you start out fast reading it you go slower and slower because the emotion sinks in and when a writer can do that its very insireing..!
-WELL DONE.!

[Rachael Day]

There's a few too many commas here and there but as far as imagery goes, well done! Vivid description.

[Deandra Dawn]

Love it, you did an amazing job with the imagery. I had a very clear picture in my head and felt every emotion.