A dramatic scene, flipside

my friend told me to do the womans POV. again heavily based off d'angelo. i might do a part 2 and a flipside of that.

Why did i….hear the front door open?

Oh my lord…its my f*****g husband.

I don’t know why he’s surprised.

He never could satisfy.

He looks like he’s gonna cry….damn

 

Hey should i….ask him to join in?

Josh come on….ask him to join in.

It might spice things up abit.

Oh god he’s having a fit.

I really have no time for this.

 

Why is he…watching us continue?

Why did he….ask to stop, oh f**k you!

I think he’s about to blow,

He’s watching so I gave a show.

I’m not evil I’m just alone…..

 

Right I’m done….he knows I’m not his woman.

Josh come on….put your f*****g clothes on.

Where has my husband gone?

He’s back, f**k he’s got a gun!

Oh my god what have I done?

Author's Note

just clear something up, josh is the guy the wife is cheating with. it might get confusing at times.

Reviews

[kayla]

haha i love this(: I like the second point of view. Definately and amazing poem.

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

interesting... i like how you used her point of view as well. i enjoyed this one, showing her thought and expression.

[Michael G.]

Creative writing. Interesting point of view.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hahahahahahaha! This was funny. Well there's always 2 sides to the story!

[That_Girl]

Josh is 'the other man' right? Regardless, this is great. It's exactly what I was hoping for! :) Almost makes you feel bad for the wife...

[Wild Willow Blue]

It sounds like Josh is the one she is cheating WITH. Anyway, I like the woman's POV here, nice job. I think you should write one from Josh's next time.