darken thoughts

Sitting here alone

It’s light outside

Hurts my eyes

 

I need my darkness

My little safe place

How can it be?

 

That the whole world

Is collapsing down upon me

It hurts me so

 

The whole world continues

While I’m stuck in this moment

Fighting to be free

 

The blue enclosing around me

Suffocating

 

Deafening

 

Blinding

I’m left defenseless

 

And the whole world could careless

So I’m going to end it

Yet I know ill regret it

But they won’t notice

 

No one will see

 

When I sects to exist.

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i feel like the format of the poem should make the words feel stronger or give the poem new meaning. this set up doesn't particularly do that. i do like the vibe from it, though.

also, sects? in the last line? isn't what you think it is or you made a typo, i believe.