this article I wrote is about how ideas,concepts, beliefs can help us progress but at the same time can cause damages in society. That depends on how one uses ideas and implements them. hope you enjoy
Ideas help us grow. Ones involving
religious, political or social content aid us in achieving a sense of ‘moral
value’ and ‘individuality’. One requires the two to foster a sense of
uniqueness and establish significance in society. Ideas are needed for progressing
and for corroborating modernism. Tolerance and evolution of human behavior is
something one can achieve by putting ideas into action.
Martin Luther King Jr presented the world
with his ideas that changed history, but then, so did Adolf Hitler. How does
one differentiate between the concepts of an idea being precarious or ideas
that could help enlighten society? While one inculcates uniqueness and
progressiveness the other fosters a lack of individuality. Ideas help us instill
a strong sense of specialty but it can also, on the contrary, snatch away that
very specialty and uniqueness. How does that occur? Well, ideas are meant to be
explored and reformed. Blindly following ideas and teachings can lead to a
decay of human personality. One forgets or is unable to relate to others who
believe in their own notions
April 15th 2017, the very concept of an
idea resulted in the loss of an innocent life in Mardan, Pakistan. Mashal Khan
was brutally killed because he didn’t conform to an idea that society deemed acceptable.
The innocent young man symbolizes an idea portraying individualism while the
mob that murdered him cold bloodily represents a group of homogeneous,
like-minded flesh. Mashal Khan chose to get influenced by ideas to reform them
into beliefs and concepts congruent to his own. The mob on the other hand chose
to falsely and blindly follow an idea instead of stopping and thinking for a
moment what their actions would cause. The lack of individualism is what brought
together the mob, all believing in a singular idea. This very ignorance and
inability to utilize ideas for progressing and intellectual proliferation is
the root of all terror and instability in Pakistan.
The human brain is meant for evolving.
Ideas can help us achieve this. Ideas should bring in the aspect of
exploration, questions and critical analysis. This is what helps a society
grow. Having diversity in thinking and accepting that diversity. Understanding
the concept of individual thinking and idea is what we lack in our country. A
few days ago, I was criticized over my attire by a teacher who didn’t stop to
think that the person she was deriding had a totally different idea of
dressing. It is dangerous to have this mindset. The idea of self righteousness
needs to be erased.
Ideas should be used for human growth.
Ideas themselves should also evolve and reform to be in congruence with current
times and people’s current mindsets. Sticking to ideas unaltered throughout
time and age is what harms society. It preaches intolerance. This is where one realizes
when an idea could be healthy or damaging. When an idea preaches intolerance
and stops you from uniqueness and diversities in other peoples thought system,
that’s when it gets dangerous. When an idea promotes homogeneity and shuns
individualism, that’s when is gets dangerous. Where an idea can help us prosper
it can also cause deleterious effects. And this is the
portrayal of a ‘Paradox of ideas’.
I stopped by to read this after reading your review of my own similar poem: "Agree to Disagree" . . . I really like the way you are trying to show the difference between using ideas to uplift & expand, as contrasted to using ideas to tear down. Your message felt a little "cerebral" (big complex words about abstract ideas) at the start, but it got much more urgent & powerful when you brought in some specific examples. I think it would be good to use a more detailed opening, to grab the reader's attention.
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You are probably one of thew group of people who give me constructive advice to improve myself .. read moreYou are probably one of thew group of people who give me constructive advice to improve myself
Im glad you liked my article
However this was the first article i ever wrote so i know its not perfect
Though im glad you still found some goodness in its message and style
Thank you so much
6 Years Ago
No need to change an existing piece of writing, based on a review. To me, the point of reviewing is .. read moreNo need to change an existing piece of writing, based on a review. To me, the point of reviewing is to throw out some possible ideas to be used in future writing efforts (((HUGS)))
Old wise man said once. Dumb down a nation and they can be controlled. Today USA. Half the people on welfare and lack proper education. This is why Trump won. Sheep can be led to the slaughter. Martin Luther King Jr. said. Education, education and more education. Educated people cannot be fooled. believe the best writer are the India writers. They love education. In the USA. Accepting less. I agree. Paradox to all things. Good and bad to very decision. But a nuclear weapon. This is a fool's folly. Thank you Pia for sharing your worthwhile thoughts and words. I did like them.
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Thank you so much !!!
There are good writers all over the world !! They just need a chance to.. read moreThank you so much !!!
There are good writers all over the world !! They just need a chance to be noticed !!
Even Pakistan has good writers ( from where i am)
Thankss
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I mean India and Pakistan. A Pakistan writer edit my work. I believe the poor country love education.. read moreI mean India and Pakistan. A Pakistan writer edit my work. I believe the poor country love education and the rich. Expect education. You are very wise. Keep writing and maybe one day. We can know a better world.
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Education in third world countries is a luxury few can afford. Education and access to knowledge. Mi.. read moreEducation in third world countries is a luxury few can afford. Education and access to knowledge. Might as well use it for the betterment of a developing economy !!
I agree. Education is the door to self-care without needing government support. If we spend 10% of w.. read moreI agree. Education is the door to self-care without needing government support. If we spend 10% of war budget on hunger, education and create jobs. The world would greatly improve.
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Only 5% of the budget in pakistan goes to education. Which is sad
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Here in USA. 25% of taxes for military. A sad world we live in.
With ideas come motives. Motives can drive an idea into an even BETTER idea...or it can drive itself into a brick wall hurting others in the process. You are correct in theory...that the human brain can evolve into something more. But if we keep drinking the Kool-Aid....or maybe it's the fluoride in the water?
Interesting, the way you convey your R&D and go about the write...I'm wondering if you should of majored in Journalism instead...you have a knack for that in the details of your presentation and reads like a news prompt...when a reader goes about the lines...
Come to think of it
I really should have.....but ive taken the field of economics and financ.. read moreCome to think of it
I really should have.....but ive taken the field of economics and finance so it kinda does help.......i developed and am improving my writing skills as a hobby
But thank you for reviewing my work !!
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You're welcome...good to read you...will come by for the others...as time avails...have a great day... read moreYou're welcome...good to read you...will come by for the others...as time avails...have a great day...
The human brain is meant for evolving. Ideas can help us achieve this. Ideas should bring in the aspect of exploration, questions and critical analysis. This is what helps a society grow. Having diversity in thinking and accepting that diversity."
I seriously liked this line, you're writing with all your emotions and you express so well, nice work Pia!
Very correctly described. There are two sides to a coin and similarly ideas may be constructive or destructive. It is the preacher and the receivers who decide which it will cling to.
Up gradation in the pattern of the thoughts rolling through time requires a very high magnitude of impact and open minded approach. But people from the history, stick to the roots ignoring the stem and branches which should not be the case.
I stopped by to read this after reading your review of my own similar poem: "Agree to Disagree" . . . I really like the way you are trying to show the difference between using ideas to uplift & expand, as contrasted to using ideas to tear down. Your message felt a little "cerebral" (big complex words about abstract ideas) at the start, but it got much more urgent & powerful when you brought in some specific examples. I think it would be good to use a more detailed opening, to grab the reader's attention.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
You are probably one of thew group of people who give me constructive advice to improve myself .. read moreYou are probably one of thew group of people who give me constructive advice to improve myself
Im glad you liked my article
However this was the first article i ever wrote so i know its not perfect
Though im glad you still found some goodness in its message and style
Thank you so much
6 Years Ago
No need to change an existing piece of writing, based on a review. To me, the point of reviewing is .. read moreNo need to change an existing piece of writing, based on a review. To me, the point of reviewing is to throw out some possible ideas to be used in future writing efforts (((HUGS)))
Pia Farooq,
Ideas; this is part of the human soul. We can't help it. As long as we breath our minds are activated. Your anilyzation was really interesting.
Any culture, any civilization from the beginning has been full of people..all kinds. This is the struggle. I think we actually just struggle to live and be.
I also think that Ideas are one with choice. Thought i'd visit you and read what you have given. Good job. I like to see people think about things and question. Very cool...........
Bless you, Kathy
This is the kind of content I could talk about for days on end. Such a fascinating thing the human is. Our thought process. How our mood can change on a whim. This has so much depth to it and the topic is incredibly interesting. It's a piece to read more than once. Well done
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It really is intricate
Took me days to write
I also made sure it was open ended so re.. read moreIt really is intricate
Took me days to write
I also made sure it was open ended so readers could interpret it in their own way
Thankss glad you liked it!!
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I really enjoy writing that can left open to the reader or has double meaning. It's definitely a we.. read moreI really enjoy writing that can left open to the reader or has double meaning. It's definitely a well written piece with plenty of layers to peel back. And you're very welcome:)