Who is thee?

Who is thee,

that plants a tree,

so gracefully?

In the heat,

of the day,

under the sky,

for the birth of another.

To plant a tree,

another friend,

to be.

A simple gift,

from above,

a simple tree,

for thee to love.

A spreader,

of nature,

of kindness,

and of love.

Who is thee?

A friend,

I see.

A child,

a man,

a baby.

I am thee,

a planter

of the trees.

A plnter,

of thee,

a planter,

of a friend to lean on.

Reviews

[Tony]

This is a nice picture of poetry. I can see the farmer, in his place. Some time ago I suppose. And thee?
A nice reminder of the beauty that is found in a life more simple. And so his children play in the grass out back of the house, laughing in innocence. While the man stands proud in his accomplishments, noble and fair.
This man is fast becoming a thing-of-the-past, in our brave new world.
Grasfuly..........gracefully

[Sarah]

Aw, this is so cute & pretty. The idea of planting a tree, and bringing life to the world is really beautiful and you captured it with the sweet, short lines. (: One typo: "grasfully" should be "gracefully". Overall, great job! (:

[Steffi]

Good idea.
Though it did seem a little choppy in sections and a little awkward.
It was still a very nice piece

[A.r. Bazian]

somewhat deep! (personal opinion)
touching!
lyrical!
rock! definitely a classic or alternative pop/rock sing!

i like it!

[Wandering Bard]

Hehe, grasfully. :) (I'm her friend. I have the right to tease. :P) Very nice poem, Poetry. I loved it.