In Hell

I cry in hell

begging for air crying for forgivness

praying for death

i search for the light, but blind from the pain

flames burning every inch of me

my aganized body slowly, painfully, slipping away

when will i breathe my last breath?

it there no way out?

or am i too weak to find the light?

Is this my penance for the mistakes i made?

suffocating, burning, in hell, slowly getting weakerand weaker, always waiting for death

 

i beg for air, when i breathe, its like inhaling a thousand shards of glass

i cry for forgiveness, the tears falling from my face, sinking into every bleeding wound, like rain drops of blood peircing every inch of my body

i pray for death

i pray for death

i pray...

Reviews

[Surrealstorm]

wow! I love the way you start this, it really catches the readers attention. I know that I was immediately sucked in. This is raw and intense. Great Write!!!

[Piikapoka]

This is my contest winner :)

[Seraph Trend]

well, the first words out of my mouth after reading this was, "holy sh**!"
It's raw and personal. I feel your voice tremble in the words. It even caused me to feel the emptiness of the insecurity of missing salvation. Great Job!