Marrige

If I kiss you,

Will you kiss me.

If I hold You,

Will you hold me.

If I love You,

Will You Love to.

If I propose,

Will you say yes.

If I say I do,

Will you say it back.

Then if I die,

I die for you.

Reviews

[Archia]

The last so line is so sweet. I love how it's all these questions essentially, but then the last line isn't. I enjoyed how although the questions weren't answered, it can be presumed that they were because of the progressing stages.

[AK]

Very sweet, very thought provoking. Well done, Sarah!

[turning violet]

Love is sometimes a singular thing.
'Till Death Do You Part?
Strong Ideas.
~V~

[Reaper]

Amazing poem. I wish I could find someone who felt like that for me.

[Amanda]

simple and sweet

[Sarah W. French]

simple and sweet. i like it. good job

[Canicus]

I like it, it's sweet. and I like how you put so much emotion behind very few words