Just Love

About how anoying love can be.

When we're together it breaks my soul,

But when we're apart it builds a hole.

When you're here I wish I could die,

But when I'm alone I ask myself why?

But right now I wish you were here,

Cause I feel alone when you are not near.

And I will always love you forever,

And maybe someday we will be together.

Reviews

[Tai]

Simplicity is often the easiest and most productive way to express ourselves. Well done.

[Sarah]

thanks a lot

[Audrey Howitt]

Simple and sweet--well done!

[Sarah]

Thanks.

[SheaRyhai]

Simple, to the point. Heartfelt.

[Megan Ord]

ok why is there a picture of me i dont rellay like that picture

[Sarah W. French]

I really like the simplicity of this poem. good job

[Dearantlers]

Short, and sweet. I love it! Perfect rhyme scheme, and just amazing! Thanks for the read request!

[Megan O.]

Why is there a picture of me?

[ghostofdawn]

'When you're here I wish I could die,
But when I'm alone I ask myself why?'

yes, when we fall thats it, you just can't turn back. i thought this was nicely expressed. fantastic.