My Tree.

A 5 minet poem short and rhyms

I like to bee,

On the see,

Where I'm free,

Away from thee,

I 'll hug a tree,

With the flee,

I am mee,

On the see,

With my flee,

And my tree.

 

Reviews

[Tai]

Not sure if I'd credit this in English class if I were you, but I would absolutely flash it to say, a close friend. Fine job.

[Sarah]

Thanks :)

[FrancescaX]

You chose the most beautiful image to complement this. Nice rhyme by mee ;)

[Craig Froman]

This was such a dancing delight of rhythm and rhyme... A pure joy to read!

[Talal Hussain]

very soft,very light...just loved it :-)

[Audrey Howitt]

This feels light and it is a cute write--fits the picture so well!

[Sarah]

Thanks. I went a bit mad while i was writing this so its a bit odd. :D

[ghostofdawn]

'With my flee,
And my tree.'

i loved the fantasy element to this and the light-hearted musings of the poet. simply excellent.

[Dearantlers]

I loved it! I thought that it was so cool that not only did it rhyme, they all ended in ee! That's so creative! And the poem itself was amazing. Short and sweet, the way I like poems, with some humor and creativeness in it. Beautiful!!!

[Michael G.]

It's a cute, interesting exercise in writing.
(I'm not sure I would turn it in English class, though!)