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Widdershins


A Poem by Scott H.
"
A midsummer night's dream
"

“Widdershins”
 
Midsummer’s eve
Get lost with me,
E’er we go wandering
Thru the Green
 
To seek the place
Where branches grow
And waystones keep
A circular row
 
Then we must whisper
Moonspun chants,
And counterclockwise
We must dance
 
Midsummer’s eve
Our flight begins,
Whisked away to
Widdershins
 

 


© 2008 Scott H.



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You should get points merely for using the word "widdershins." You have great word choice - no cluttering words - everything in it's place to create a strong image with rhythm as well as prose. This is great - I felt like I was skipping along to Elfland, closer in each stanza, without you forcing it. You lead the reader along instead of pushing... adds to the mystery of the journey.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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