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Kites

Kites

A Poem by Rc R. Vagilidad
"

Kites don't have wings....

"

Kites don't have wings, she said....

 

And I knew she was her,

I've fallen in love with.

 

Yes, we trailed the heavens once...

 

No, she's not an angel no more because she left her wings. Yes for me. Left her wings for me.

 

And I, a devil lives with the truth and the sky was forbidden for both of us.

 

We fly kites to where the sky she longed me to be with her but.....

Sky, where fallen angels are forbidden to tread once more...No matter, the sky is quite vast, and the thing is we are in-love.

 

Kites don't even have wings, but they soared way up high to the vastness of the forbidden sky. And they don't fall in love either, yet they soar without conditions.

 

 

© 2008 Rc R. Vagilidad


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This is a beautiful poem. I like it and it true

Dalebear

Posted 13 Years Ago


daw My Forbidden Sky. hihi.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, kite does soar high but not for long and when someone cuts through the tether, it will lose control and will probably get lost. So much like love---forbidden love. I enjoyed this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this thoughtful read, and it has a wonderful ending.

jkb

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwww.. my gosh! it is PERFECT. i so love your idea of using the kites theme, to show the delicate sorrow of the once heavenly being because the kite can soar through what was her home before she fell... in love.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Rc R. Vagilidad
Rc R. Vagilidad

Avenida Quezon Street Sibalom, Antique, Western Visayas, Philippines



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