the main character

this is the angel~

name : theo

age : 16

angel : night

description : he is kind and dont like to steal or hurt someone. he is really quite person.

name : aray

age : 16

angel : light

description : he is like to annoy everyone, dont like peaceful. he is very active angel and like to mess up his job.

Reviews

[FrancescaX]

Aray and Theo are HAWT. that is hot in my language. i'm in love with ....i don't even know.

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. honestly, i want them to my bf too XD

[Irvette Dauphine]

*tobe my bf

[FrancescaX]

they are actually so cool. now that i have read about them. hot and awesome...what a combination

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks :)

[FrancescaX]

you are welcome.

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Waah looks interesting :)

What anime are they from?

[Irvette Dauphine]

D.N Angel

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Haven't watched that one I plan to and is interested to but unfortunately until a friend of mine caves in and accepts defeat I can't watch it. I'm assuming it's good

[Irvette Dauphine]

i never watch it too DX

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

lol I assumed you watched it XD but then they do look really fitting for your characters

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. that's why i choose them..
so many angel's pics out there, but this is really fit to my story :)

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Good job *thumbs up* You have a good eye

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks :3

[Tsukin Archangel]

pppp nice~ did u make teh pictures?

[Irvette Dauphine]

no, i just found it and edit the pics..

[Tsukin Archangel]

ah ok i c :3 are they from DNAngel then? the pics?

[Irvette Dauphine]

yeep..

[Tsukin Archangel]

Darrrrkkkk~

[Irvette Dauphine]

and krad

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol yeah i didnt remember that other guys name lol

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. that just anagram from dark :)

[Tsukin Archangel]

yeah is that where u got the idea from? its similiar

[Irvette Dauphine]

yup.. but i didnt know about the story, i just know the character..
that's why i write this is by my way..

[Tsukin Archangel]

ah its different either way lol Dark and Krad arent angels for one and the stories are very diff dont worry~

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. you know all about D.N Angel?

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol kinda i used to b a bit obsessed with it when i was younger

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha..

[Tsukin Archangel]

lol yeah......^^; good times good times DNAngel

[Irvette Dauphine]

already read all chapter here and check my photos??

[Tsukin Archangel]

i voted on a pic and i have like a chap or two more to read

[Irvette Dauphine]

still thinking about the character, not yet start to write the story

[Tsukin Archangel]

ok i'm sure u'll come up with a great persona ;3

[Serenity Faith]

EEEEEK! >.< I'm already looking forward to this! Writing will definitely help you to improve your English. You're already doing an awesome job. English is one of the most confusing and complicated languages to learn. Where are you from if you don't mind my asking?

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. hard to learn english to writing.
but i trying my best to improve my writing, especially my grammar.
i am from indonesia :)

[Miiki]

I admire how you're pushing yourself to write in a language that you aren't used to because you have great ideas and if you keep trying, I'm sure you'll be a great writer one day. I understand what it's like too, English was my second language too and I still have trouble with it today while perfecting my first language. Keep trying and don't let anything stop you!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks to support me =D

[Irvette Dauphine]

already read the prologue???

[Miiki]

yeah, it sounds really interesting! :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

wanna make the prologue and the rest of the story fast!!
what do u think about the character??

[Dominique]

Hmm for the light guy, I am thinking of a nightingale, or mabe a Tristan.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks for the suggestion :)

[corvus]

Theodore or Thaddeus for the first guy..

James for the second guy?

[Irvette Dauphine]

maybe.. i'll think about it..
thanks for your suggestion~

[Irvette Dauphine]

i like theodore, but james, i think it too ordinary -sorry...

[corvus]

that's cool haha

[Irvette Dauphine]

and i think james is not fit with the character...

[Junert]

Sounds interesting but I'm unwilling to read an entire book full of grammar errors. Clearly you love writing and have great imaginations so why don't you make an effort to better your English or perhaps write in a language which you wouldn't make mistakes. I doubt I can read your work in a different language too. You're gifted so please try to make others see that gift more clearly.

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. i still learn it now..
so, i think i can improve my grammar and i'll do my best to make my writing amazing :)

[Junert]

That would be awesome.

[Weeping Willow]

cool, Dark and Kard I thing thats their names in D.n angel but i'm like this it's a bit diffferent from D.N angel which is good

[Irvette Dauphine]

what all i know is dark is true light angel and kard is white night angel
JUST that what i know..
so, i want new name and make this story by my own version..