A Poem by Tim


 My hands are not soft or smooth


 They are rough and calloused


 But they can still touch softly

© 2008 Tim

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Oohh...nice and concise and yet very powerful!
Full circle and talented....I like this piece a lot xx

Posted 7 Years Ago

Nice, it's amazing how looks
can be deceiving

Just because the hands are
rough, it does not mean the touch is

Great write!

Orlando M

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice and comforting

Posted 9 Years Ago

Short and sweet! Simply wonderful :) Hugs

Posted 9 Years Ago

With such few words you make such a stirring piece.
Rough yet gentle.
Nice write

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow! These few words just say so much.
Super sweet and wonderful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

says a lot in a very few words...........its a beautiful poem indeed....... :)

Poetic Soul

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi Tim,

I am so sorry I have not dropped in for a visit but things have been rather crazy on my side of the screen.
I loved these few simple lines that say so much. The gift to touch a heart and soul is a true gift indeed.
Always a pleasure my friend,

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my, what a ream of meaning in just a few words. This is wonderful, truly wonderful. Lucky the woman who finds this man!

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 24, 2008



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