Touch

Touch

A Poem by Tim

 

 My hands are not soft or smooth

 

 They are rough and calloused

 

 But they can still touch softly


© 2008 Tim



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Oohh...nice and concise and yet very powerful!
Full circle and talented....I like this piece a lot xx

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice, it's amazing how looks
can be deceiving

Just because the hands are
rough, it does not mean the touch is

Great write!

Orlando M

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice and comforting

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and sweet! Simply wonderful :) Hugs

Posted 9 Years Ago


With such few words you make such a stirring piece.
Rough yet gentle.
Nice write
-ST

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow! These few words just say so much.
Super sweet and wonderful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


says a lot in a very few words...........its a beautiful poem indeed....... :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi Tim,

I am so sorry I have not dropped in for a visit but things have been rather crazy on my side of the screen.
I loved these few simple lines that say so much. The gift to touch a heart and soul is a true gift indeed.
Always a pleasure my friend,
Lesa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my, what a ream of meaning in just a few words. This is wonderful, truly wonderful. Lucky the woman who finds this man!

Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tim
Tim

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I am an easy going person who loves the outdoors and everything that goes with it. Hiking , canoeing, fishing and gardening I was born and raised in New England. I am currently working on buildin.. more..

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