Friendship

A good friend is an angel

I once told myself,

friendship isnt who you've known the longest,

its who came and never left.

When I was all confused,

and left in the corner,

this angel came,

and said, 

"you're not the one to blame",

without it taking any longer,

I became stronger,

and now this angel I met,

through death,

and through threat,

is the one, 

I walk with and say,

"let this memory stay",

I say, "let's pray,

for a friendship that may stay."

I once told myself,

friendship is when there's nothing but loyalty,

and they ask me,

"what about love?"

I tell them,

love is loyalty too,

and when they ask me "how?"

I refer to her name,

I say,

"look at us, look at her,

look at my angel,

and then come back and claim,

that I am wrong."

They come back strong, 

and they say,

"you're right, 

she is bright."

Reviews

[e]

Lovely! This poem makes me feel warm. Full stops, commas, and capitalization are the only things I would correct. Happy writing!

[poemsbya]

Thank you! I will

[Jonny Tobin]

I like this. Really strong imagery and description. You should focus on structure: full stops and commas?

[poemsbya]

Thank you so much! I'll try my best.