All About You

It is all about you

I ask nothing in return

I whisper sweetly as I kiss your sweet lips

There are times when love is sharing

Joint pleasure and discovery

But there are times when it is all about you

Not a duty, but a pleasure

Touching your body strikes lightning into my soul

The taste of your skin

Your quiver at my touch

The line of your thigh

I move my fingers gently over your body

Touching, stroking, and caressing

I explore every fold of your passion

Gently stimulating the pinnacle of your femininity

My kisses warm and caring on your breasts

Sending shots of ecstasy through your entire body

As you shudder in absolute pleasure 

I feel the explosion of joy through my body as well

It is all about you

I ask nothing in return

The joy I feel is so complete

Nothing else required

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

this is what I call a true expression of love. well done...

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I love this, it's beautiful.. You truly make it sound like love, and like it's important to you, and not just another pointless thing like some people make it seem.. Great job with this.

[Hester Vane]

Different (more erotic!) than your other work, but a great write. Sincere and sweet.

[Dark Butterfly]

a bit to pournographic for me, but you still a great poet

[mandy]

lovely, lovely, lovely! very sweet description of an act of love. and so unselfish and giving..and in giving, receiving as well.....only thing i might suggest,,is replace the word,,,shutter,,,with shudder..

[Mia]

"But there are times when it is all about you
Not a duty, but a pleasure"
I love those lines. You write such beautiful poetry it is a pleasure to enjoy!

[AleyshaRosa]

There is more joy in giving than receiving.
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Koodoos

[Dr. Wood ?]

giving is more rewarding than taking....Love is THIS

[Coyote Poetry]

When two people open doors to love and passion. These are the places of memories we will hold on to forever. Good description led reader into the pleasure and joy of love. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[quinfinn]

if it ain't broke.....don't fix it. isn't it wonderful to feel these things from your very core? this is just saucy enough to get the blood flowing but not in the least obscene. well done