As Destiny Waits~

 

 

 

As we await our destiny,

are you ever, for a moment
sorry that I found you
peeking from my shadows

my eyes fluttering
catching a glimpse of sun
within the glimmering rays
of those enchanting eyes of yours;
The first day our eyes met
my heart, a puddle
fallen to your whisper

My hands
had never held such warmth
as when you stroked my wrist
and your feelings
flowed through my veins
mating with my soul

love was no longer just a word

and the World suddenly was so small,
when compared to us.




♥♥

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautifully written as all your poems have been. Well done.



This part was amazing


My hands
had never held such warmth
as when you stroked my wrist
and your feelings
flowed through my veins
mating with my soul

love was no longer just a word

and the World suddenly was so small,
when compared to us.



Keep up the good work.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful poem Congrats on your win.

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[PerfectFlaw90]

Jeez, I don't know how you do it, but you've got such a natural talent for making simple words sound so...beautiful. The way you notice and capture everything that makes life worth living is so inspiring. This was just awesome, great flow and softness. As always, loved it.

[Michael Carr]

very nice lynda.
the imagery is absolutly beautiful in the piece, powerful but sincere, very serene at the same time.
really enjoyed the fluttering eye line with the glimpse of the sun, gave the reader a touching and warm feeling when reading the work.
well done again. :)