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A Poem by poet2angels (lynda)
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a collaboration by looneyeclipse and poet2angels~

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Black and white, and colors in between
as petals open in sweet invitation
 

his fingers following curves
in words she whispers

passion painted upon the mind
with soft strokes of sensuality
a kiss of quiet twilight
her glass, slipping from it's grip

hand laced in velvet possibilities
tempting touch without a word

pages turning tide
the novel, at it's climax ~

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 poet2angels (lynda)


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This is vivid and I could almost see it happening. Great work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice indeed.....a wonderfully captured praise to a finer lifes pleasure....wonderful imagery......

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found the imagery alluring, particularly the glass slipping. :)
Interesting ending I was not expecting.

your voices worked very well together
great job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very successful and eloquent collaboration. Lovely imagery and alliteration.Bravo to you both!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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poet2angels (lynda)

Arlington, TX



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