Pen Therapy

Pen Therapy

A Poem by Asante
"

Happy New Year, everybody. bye.

"
Heal, Asante.
Feel.
Let the walls collapse
so I can love you free of
condition. Peel into your smile.
Heal.
Wheel away your broken
butterflies, veer from your
ghosts, rinse your heels, raise
yourself to life.

© 2017 Asante



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Worthwhile and wise words shared. We must heal to go forward. Shouldn't forget. Old pain and memory make us know. Love to come slow and easy. Don't look for love. Love will find you. Thank you Asante for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

6 Days Ago

Wisdom in your words, my brother. Wise, wise man, you. Also what I need to read as of late. Thank yo.. read more



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This piece is so strong :)
In a concise way, it reveals only self help is key to everything around you..
I totally loved it :)

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

8 Hours Ago

It makes me proud to know that you found strength in my work, Amrita.
An honor.
Thank .. read more
To me, this wonderful poem, is showing that 'previous baggage' does get in the way of a healthy relationship. People who go on and on about their past problems does often irritate me. So, your last verse 'Heal' Wheel away your broken butterflies etc'', is one I am going to learn by heart, so I can say it to the next 'broken-down' person I talk to!! Thank you.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

6 Days Ago

You aren't wrong in your assessment, Aunty aha. It means a mighty lot to me, that you'd want to comm.. read more
I really feel both the sadness and the strength in these well chosen words. Very best wishes for 2018 x

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

6 Days Ago

Thank you, my friend.
Only victories for you this year. x
Worthwhile and wise words shared. We must heal to go forward. Shouldn't forget. Old pain and memory make us know. Love to come slow and easy. Don't look for love. Love will find you. Thank you Asante for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

6 Days Ago

Wisdom in your words, my brother. Wise, wise man, you. Also what I need to read as of late. Thank yo.. read more
A nice innovative poem. I now am settled in Tanzania where Asante means thank you. Does your name and the word in poem mean that too? Thumbs up.



I'm a newbie here, pls read my poems but pleez review/comment only my 2nd , my newest poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, Always nice to meet poem pals. And I like to know if my poem is easily understood as intended.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

2 Weeks Ago

Tanzania, that's beautiful. I was just speaking with a friend about wanting to visit Cape, granted t.. read more
This was different from what I've read so far. I can actually feel it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

2 Weeks Ago

I wear that like a badge of honor, aha. I'm glad you felt anything of it.

Thank you, .. read more
Beautiful way start the New Year.
All my best to you and yours.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

2 Weeks Ago

Likewise, brother. All the best for you.
i agree with Robert...a perfect complement to the New Year starting... a poem of letting go of the broken, and embracing that which is whole..
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

2 Weeks Ago

Absolutely.

Thank you kindly, J. Have a special year.
A good poem to start the New Year. Self-talk, reflection, rediscovery, and new aspirations. Nice piece!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your words, brother.

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