My Apologies

My Apologies

A Poem by poetic-raven2012
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It's not a poem. It's a song. :)

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My Apologies

One day, I’ll lay it all down,
I’ll let you see the smiles, let you see the frowns.
You’ll see the maddening, you’ll see saddening and
no matter what I say, no matter how it lays,
you’ll come back and tear me down.

And I’ll say my apologies;
and I’ll say my apologies…

I’m sorry for every day;
I’m sorry I see your face;
I’m sorry you saw me cry;
I’m sorry I bled that night;
I’m sorry…it’ll be alright.

One night, I laid it all down.
You sat and looked at me, then turned around.
And I cried,
’cause you saw the signs, you saw the steep climb,
but you didn’t lend a hand, you just turn and ran.
But I know that soon you’ll be back to tear me down.

And I’ll say my apologies;
and I’ll say my apologies…

I’m sorry for every day;
I’m sorry I see your face;
I’m sorry you saw me cry;
I’m sorry I bled that night;
I’m sorry…I’m not alright.

© 2010 poetic-raven2012


Author's Note

poetic-raven2012
Okay, so songs are a bit difficult to read without a base for how they sound. It's rap/rock. It's got basically the same pattern as Linkin Park's "In the End."

Hope that helps. :)

My first song. What do you think? Any const.crit. would be wonderful.

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Hiya. I'm Jenn, I'm fifteen. I have the five most amazing best friends in the world. ♥ I spend as much time as possible with them as possible. I hate being home; my mom and I constantly fight. .. more..

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A Poem by poetic-raven2012