Three Words

Three Words

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Each night as I

Lay my head softly

Next to yours

I listen to the rise

And fall of your breath

Comforted in the feel

Of the heat your

Body generates

 

Your arm draped

Gently across

My midsection

Embracing me

Without knowledge

Giving me solace      

In the simple

Reaction to my

Presence

 

As you slumber

When I know that

You are sound asleep

I whisper softly

Three words             

That are felt

Deep within my being

 

Words that speak

And surge through

My content soul

The chords are strumming

Through my veins

Each night as you sleep

I think of you with love

Softly saying those words

With your name.

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


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This is so calm and comforting, and so emotional at the same time. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

I have this content calm feeling when I am curled up with my guy at night. He makes me feel whole.
I really understand these feelings and u wrote so beautifully :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

thank you
Colleen a Bean

11 Years Ago

no problem :)
You have shared a place, quiet, reverent , the space warm and hallowed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

Those three words are softly whispered in the quiet hours while he is sleeping. Hopefully filling h.. read more
Awe that is so sweet and tender... very very touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

All these words are at the heart of my breath, the inner deepest part of my soul. When I am in love.. read more
The first stanza is amazing, body to body can give double heat, (not only sexual) but also when two people are frozen, it's the best way to survive. Loved that part...
In the second stanza, I loved the fact the lover slept, and without knowledge embraced his unconciousness. Amazingly worded, as you reacted as it gave presence, The third stanza dear one, oh loved it, you're like me, as I whisper my hubby nightly words, and he picks them up even when he was asleep... so beautiful to read.... (you're a very high sensitive soul too) I see.
It's pure trust, confident love in the last stanza, as it should be, this is marvelous, and an ode to all who don't have this bless, they will find soon. Exquisite piece.

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

love it. Truly smiling.

11 Years Ago

But I know what you mean poetess, sometimes, we never say it... and it's already felt.

11 Years Ago

Me too :)
I could just picture this; in the silent depths of the night, the warmth of your loved one generates that feeling of protection,of completeness!you described a simple moment very beautifully!bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arielle Ann

11 Years Ago

a lucky few are there like you dear;god bless!
Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

It has been a long time coming. i had an abusive relationship before this one and it took me four y.. read more
Arielle Ann

11 Years Ago

what happens always happens for the better; trust the almighty and move on.Am sure he has a lot of p.. read more
I am so loving this.. I could feel this life body, mind and spirit.. very soft and gentle but full of power and beauty..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

I can do romantic and loving when I am in the right mind frame and have great inspiration for it. T.. read more
Beautiful, beautiful. I love the subtle expressions. Great flow, too. Lovely job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

some times being subtle is the key and sometimes being over the top is what is needed. I wanted thi.. read more
A beautiful poem of love. A wise person appreciate the person who stayed with them for years and don't complain. I like the complete poem. A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

I love the guy I am with and he is an amazing person flaws and all. I think flaws make the person w.. read more
You should go ion for writing Valentine cards! Nice Romantic thoughts... Long may it continue!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

11 Years Ago

lol

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

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