Sliding Stars

Quiet your mind

Soar threw the nebula

Slide free of reality

Dance in the moment

Of two beings connected

Their universal strings

Twist, becoming interlaced 

Sliding around the stars

On this cosmic ride

Surfing on ethereal tides

Hold your hand in mine

As we melt into one

Creating a unique world

Private, only for us 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Ah, the topic of space. Such a good choice and what I imagined here within just your first stanza was the simple image of two people holding hands and waltzing along the top of a planet. Having the stars be with only source of light. Surrounded by quiet and allowing the people to think of and create their own sound of music to take a step to. Truly beautiful...I love your talent :)

[Poetic Beauty]

That was pretty much the idea and images that ran through my mind when I wrote this pieces.

[Traci]

Cosmic love, beautifully penned, PB.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to write a bit abstract and about cosmic love. Thank you.

[Aehr]

I actually love the description here. The last stanza was an amazing end to it. Great job.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes we meet amazing people in our dreams.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Loved this one! You have captured that perfect moment when two lovers become one and the universe explodes around them. Very well done!

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh those moments that make you sigh. I am glad you saw that in this piece. It really is about creating your own private world with your lover and connecting deeply.

[Im His Daughter]

the feeling of love is swirling & creating a passionate heat between the lovers. awesome

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I am glad you could feel the swirling of love.

[Jack...]

Universal love, orbiting in each other's arms. very cool my friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I love to write about love drifting in space. Gives it that feel of floating.

[Relic]

This sounds like a good dose of meditation and fantasy rolled into one. There's also a romantic edge to it that gives it character. A nice write.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. The fantasy and meditation feel is what I was hoping entwined with love.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

Hmm...wondrful depiction of love in cosmos. Must say, your poems are short and revealing :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

Not all my poems are short. It all depends on what comes to mind. I am glad you like the descriptions I weaved into this piece.

[K. Louis]

cosmic love...I don't care for the text you chose (it's hard to read) but the imagery is nice.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you like the words I painted in this piece.