Dance Laugh Understand

Dance Laugh Understand

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Dance with me
In the pouring rain
Kiss me with wet lips
As the sky cries

Dance with me
But for a moment
Laugh with me
But for a second
Understand me
But for a lifetime

Laugh with me
Under the midnight sky
As joy rises
Circling the clouds

Dance with me
But for a moment
Laugh with me
But for a second
Understand me
But for a lifetime

Understand me
Deep within your heart
Grasp who I am in your bones
Please don't make me feel so alone

© 2017 Poetic Beauty


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This reads like a passionate love song, with the words flowing in harmony and the repetition giving resonance to the theme. I love the delicate simplicity in this piece as well as your unique descriptions in how they express the essence of your lover. Your first stanza, with its imagery (the "sky crying" ... ahhh lovely) sets the ambience perfectly, and I love how you keep that same sense of passion and wonder throughout.
Though (a minor critique) I think it would read smoother if only the lines that began new sentences were capitalized (as opposed to every line), the message still bleeds through with eloquence and clarity. This was penned with a heavenly touch.

- William Liston

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review. It is much like a love song. It is some deep feeling from my.. read more



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Love the images that flow through this one. Dancing with a lover.Endless dancing into Love;-]

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
The dancing, how it is life giving. Beautiful reflections of love, on finding the joy of oneness in the endless dance, another to move through each day with. Wondrous.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

The dance is beautiful only if the participant is willing
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

So painfully true, though the memories of movement can bring joy in moments.
Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

This is so very true.

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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