Etched on the Heart

Etched on the Heart

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Beneath this fleshy outer layer
Underneath sinew and bone
Lays a muscle that beats relentlessly
Thumping a perfect rhythm
Life sustaining beat
Of immaculate song

Look beyond the biology
Gaze past the rib cage
Deeper still inspect the pericardium
With a microscope

Etched hidden, immersed
Submerged in the physiology
Are words scripted, engraved
On the outside layer of this
Delicately strong organ

Some souls transcribe
Infusing their ink
Sketching their names on the heart
Illuminating letters on their soul

© 2017 Poetic Beauty



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Wow this is so deep and mesmerizing and raw and pure. I could actually see that very heart, as it beat, giving life to the body it beholds, and the scars and words embezzled on the muscle of that heart as well.
Imagery was amazing, and your writing seems very professional in terms of anatomy and such. I felt as if I was the Doctor operating within a patients body to seek this heart out. Superb Writing, Great Job

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much. It took some tweaking to get the right words in their place



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Wonderful use of words and thoughts dear friend.
"Look beyond the biology
Gaze past the rib cage
Deeper still inspect the pericardium
With a microscope "
The above lines. Perfect and true. We must open our eyes to see the real person and the real truth. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I’m glad you enjoyed the deep sentiment in this piece
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

I did. A wonderful poem my friend.
I really liked how you transposed the coldness of the medical body to the discovery and warmth of the existential heart and the underlying soul we call humanity. You did it it in a smooth, transitional way and made me see the light... or more specifically "a" light. Way to go PB, a spot-on write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you for you kind words. WE all have words transcribed on our hearts and souls if only we would.. read more
This refresher in physiology was most useful but more to the point you make the statement in this interesting write that some people leave their indelible mark on us and it is writ deep.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I find it so true that people leave impressions within us.
Brought a tear to my eye. Mesmerising writing

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I’m glad this had an emotional pull. Many people leave beauty within us.
I love how you went from the outside to the inside!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I figured you can’t see the inside if you don’t first look at the outside. Thank you for reading.. read more
Seems we should never overlook what's been left upon or within The Heart. Need notice how marks have been left - as if initials carved into the bark of a tree. Poetry contrives to turn the vessel into a mighty treasure CHEST - in many ways it is. Except that not only might it illuminate but can be broken into and robbed!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I’m glad you like doing this poem. We all have emotional makes left by people if we take a closer .. read more
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

So very true. Dorgive, noticed typos in my review, have amended now.
Such beauty....! Like this poem a lot.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading this poem and I’m glad you liked it.
I like this poem. I like the way you begin on the 'physical' level, descriptive, and end on the 'esoteric' level, with 'soul'. Our bodies are amazing things, aren't they? And I am sure all our little cells and things, chat away to each other!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked how I started with the physical and moved to the soul
Whether someone we love spends a lifetime or a moment in time with us they will always be a part of our heart even if we don't realize it.

Beautiful written.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

Yes very much so
Love this
Love this
You have excelled

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.
Juliespenhere.

7 Months Ago

I did as all of yours x

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Added on July 13, 2017
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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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