The Pauses

The Pauses

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Between the spoken lines, there are pauses
Listen carefully to the silence
For there is a whole world of conversation
Going on between those pauses

Read carefully to what is written
Immerse yourself within those words
There is a whole chapter
That has already been published

Look deeply at the pictures sent
Galaxies are created with brush strokes
The eyes will reveal the truth

On days without communication
Think intensely about the quiet
For she is having an internal debate
About how she feels about you

© 2017 Poetic Beauty



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The most important things to hear can be heard between pauses, it is just most people keeps on talking and don't know how to listen. And I heard my own voice saying those last two lines... the internal debates that I don't know how to end. Thanks for this wonderful piece. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

8 Months Ago

In those pause is a whole world of conversation and thought. Thanking you for reading



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This is fine writing indeed. I think sometimes silence conveys more than words do... But only few know how to decipher those pauses...
Beautifully penned.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

You are correct. Those silence are much more complicated than the word that are written or spoken.
As you so poetically point out, there is far more to communicating with others than just hearing their words. The pauses, intonation, body language, and facial expressions mean at least as much as their words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

You are completely correct. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
we need pauses for impact, great work, enjoyed this fine piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Communication is so much more than the words themselves.
People express so much more through silence than through words...Reading between the lines, understanding the silences...not all can or even try. those who do are keepers. Beautifully written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. Yes there are many who can't read between the lines and some that don't want to.
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

You are welcome
This piece is amazing. I feel like this could have been written about me. You have such a talent with your work. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Many of my poems are based on truth. I'm glad u liked this poem. I really do have separat.. read more
Melissa Hamilton

1 Year Ago

Oh, I do too. It's the only way I can sort things out most of the time.
This is such a beautiful poem! Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you. Sometimes I have edited conversations while the real ones are going on in my mind.
oh boy, those pregnant pauses, and the uncomfortable silence for the speaker...or the subject of the poem---or both---
that pondering can be deafening.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Yes the pondering can be ear screeching
I don't know why i smiled at the last line, maybe because it reads like a mystery or creepy! Logic spiritual speaks in your words.. with, in places a touch of drama to magnify what you're thinking,
' Read carefully to what is written ~ Emerged within those words ~ Is a whole chapter ~ That has already been published .. ' Food for thought indeed. Many thanks for sharing such perceptive thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you. That is my mind at work. I am having a whole conversation within my mind during said paus.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Would be too complex for me!
Eyes do reveal the truth as feelings reveal what is hidden. And for sure, we have to read people carefully. Excellent...:)................

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you. You are absolutely correct.
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. ....::::)))))
Oh my, this is another beautifully penned piece of your heart ... and I think I already know "how she feels about him ~ but, what to do about it is the real issue.

... so, yes please "Pause", take a deep breath and do what you know is the right thing. I've always been of the belief that "if it's meant to be - it will be".

Please take care & continuing allowing your heart to speak through your poetry.

Blessings my friend, 🙏
~ hsg



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

We shall see what happens

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Poetic Beauty

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