Vision from My Window

Vision from My Window

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Spring my favorite time of year
When the red poppies start to bloom
The blue sky is completely clear
I see them looking out my room

Planted in a wooden window box
With the bright sun shining down
Scampering about a small red fox
Slyly scurries here, there and all around

I hear a clank in the back
The fox hit the bumper of metal
I know his poor head did crack
I shrug and go put on the tea kettle.

© 2010 Poetic Beauty


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I enjoy watching nature also. Really excited about my plants that are popping out of the ground. This is exactly what I usually do with my deer and bad squirrels. Animals bring so much excitement and humor to our world.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love your imagery!

Posted 14 Years Ago



Hey the heck with the fox I need some tea darn it! :P
Your love of nature just blooms forth Poetic!

Very sweet!
Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago


Spring is awfully nice, isn't it?
The ending surprised me but I really like the write.
It's fresh& edgy and drew me right in.
Great write!!

-Elissa :D


Posted 14 Years Ago


its life at its best....I didnt see the fox part coming. I really liked this, beautiful and funny and direct all at the same time. Good Work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is wonderful and creative. your visuals is amazing and flow very nicely. i enjoyed reading this piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


LMAO... oh my God that was really cute... I love spring too... it is the season of new life the way I see it... I really enjoyed this little poem, brought a warm smile.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on March 16, 2010
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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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