Humanly Correct

Humanly Correct

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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humanly correct not politically correct

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We all bleed scarlet red

Blood pulsing in our veins

Every person feels pain

And cries salty tears

When sorrow is near

 

We all need air to breathe

Saturating our two lungs

While heart beating has begun

Kidneys filter our blood

And thoughts in our mind do flood

 

So why does our color matter?

It is merely our skin

Why did this even begin?

We have two eyes to see

Look with your heart, my plea

 

Won’t we all be ashamed

When we see God’s marbled skin

With this insight the weeping will begin

Why can’t you humans see

You are all magnificent

In the fact you’re different

 

Every child needs love

Woman needs a hand to hold

A person with to grow old

Man needs a woman’s heart

Before completeness starts

 

We are all the same inside

One mind to form thoughts

On heart so love is sought

Two lungs in order to breathe

Tears allowing us to grieve

 

One nose for us to smell

Two ear in which to hear

So let go of anger and fear

Let your heart be your guide

And love will always be at your side

 

Won’t be all be ashamed

When we see God’s marbled skin

With this insight the weeping will begin

Why can’t you humans see

That you all are magnificent

In the fact you’re different

© 2011 Poetic Beauty



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Few of us have power or titles, wealth or wisdom, but, what we do have is Self Unique.

Whereas your entire poem has great emotion and sincerity, this stanza says so much to me, ' We are all the same inside ~ One mind to form thoughts ~ On heart so love is sought Two lungs in order to breathe ~ Tears allowing us to grieve '

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OT
amen!!! haha if this was read aloud I'm sure we'd all be raising our arms in agreement here! all with a nice rhyme - we're both the same and different and better for it!! nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Love it, it’s so true and insightful and I totally agree.
Excellent write.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Won't We all be ashamed when We see God's Rainbow colored skin..for He only has skin to remind us it is not needed...He only uses it to comment on our lack of sight.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This a beautifully spirited insight that whispers a sense of right in a world
filled with so much wrong, I enjoyed the form and talent :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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ZeN
good strong write


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1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very thought provoking and deep. I love this. Its beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, wonderfull meaning, very deep, lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write,
very true,
we all bleed red when cut!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Few of us have power or titles, wealth or wisdom, but, what we do have is Self Unique.

Whereas your entire poem has great emotion and sincerity, this stanza says so much to me, ' We are all the same inside ~ One mind to form thoughts ~ On heart so love is sought Two lungs in order to breathe ~ Tears allowing us to grieve '

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a shame that people with small minds judge others on anything other than their worth. Great write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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