Fateful Revelation

Revelation can burst

With an infernos flame

Unearthly revealing

A mysterious truth

Unraveling the web

Of a secret message

Illuminating what was

Once shrouded in the ether

 

With a tranquil quiet mind

The calamity clears

A silver metallic

Realization shines

As pretentious knowledge

Is discarded in the wind

Allowing symphonic

Clarity to vibrate

 

The blackened disarray

Is now clearly transparent

Giving the solid mind

Sparkling crystal perception

 But sometimes majestic

Revelation comes too late

As Fate weaves its

Intricate strangling web

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The more I study the revelation and what is real or lies. The less I know. Madness controlled the world. Blackness and disarray is in charge. Last line is a true statement.
"Revelation comes too late
As Fate weaves its
Intricate strangling web"
I enjoyed this poem. Open the doors to a thousand questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

what I get from this is a dream that trying to reveal the answer to a question we have yet to find I love this cause i can read this again and go in a different detection.
good job.

[Enigma]

An intricate and truly amazing piece of poetry. The words are chosen with care and it has a very calm peaceful feel to it. Like the water where the waves never crash and if you look at it, it appears like a vast sheet of glass.
As for the revelation, I loved the last three lines of the poem. Revelation always lags behind the fate...well, almost always. :)
Great job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

AH how the human mind believes what it chooses to, well done

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Beauty this makes one question the clarity of our mind. Very thought provoking peace. You like to word play I have come to notice this about you. I really like it.
Have a Great Weekend Beaauty xoxox

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the way you used the words, creative and well written!

[KAREN]

Excellent job using the words. Creative and solid write.

[TJ]

Excellent piece! Your words are chosen masterfully but it's the main idea of this I enjoy most. Revelation can disillusion us at any moment and we should welcome that knowledge

[Ruth]

Goodness, this makes me really think love....revelation can devour at times :)
Poignant!
xx

[Tina Kline]

Excellent job, I enjoyed this write. Revelation can be mysterious unless it is very clear which never seems to be the way.

[Hello, Goodbye]

So true.. this poem hits its points well and it has an enjoyable resolute direction.