Mercurial Desire

for creative poetry

Wrapped in mystery

Within a vivid dreams

Lies a lithe heart

Pulsing with aphrodisiac need

 

Over zealous

With amative feeling

Circulation becomes passion

And mercurial desire

 

Bawdy fantasies

Melt frigid ice

As velvet temptations

Grace violet satin

Pleasures

That dwell inside

 

Cascading downward

Creating molten lava

To sporadically arise

As tremors sparkle

Awakening a new dance

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Nice quicksilver metaphor. Reminds me of how an "elixir of cinnabar" sounds like a delightful tea yet is so very deadly. Yet I'm wayed from and by the intrigue of your poem. The onset of sensual arousal is so well captured here. It's a Kodak moment for initiation. Love this, for it's one sentiment nobody but this author has been able to pull off in poetry. Superb feeling this is too... ;)

[Mauricio Montoya]

love the choice of words that bring this piece together.
Excellent write.

[ShaneBerry]

very nice and creative. as usual you have great diction and unique word choice. no spelling mistakes and no grammar issues i see. this is nice and very calm. thank you for sharing! :)
-S.B.-

[Jeremy Baker]

I loved the energy and movement in this write.

[imagination101]

This was stuninng from start to finish! Great passion filled write!

[Eagle Cruagh]

I am sure that all your dances are taken.
This is the most inspiring invitation to
dance.
Interesting, clever, lovable.
---- John

[♛ Jordan Midnight..]

Passionate, Romantic, and a touch erotic, This is a Wonderful piece!

[storiestotell]

Very passionate, and beautiful!
Bawdy fantasies
Melt frigid ice
As velvet temptations
Grace violet sat in
Pleasures
That dwell inside

[Zoey Dead Girl]

Great write. Showed the passion that was within in. Good word choice also. keep up the good work

[Lily Mae]

You do these kind of writes with passion and a flare that's all your own.. Live it and breathe it..xo