Individual Absorption

A tidal wave of emotions that spans across time and distance in a magnetic pull through the year.

In the quiet moments

When the world slumbers

One name shimmers

Across the mind

Chanting its melody

Of distance and time

 

Beckoning to the heart

To bridge the space

Yelling deep inside

You know you want to

Simply touch his face

 

Spring forth

Set in motion

What the soul

Has been yearning for

Let two beings become

One whole

 

Enjoy the pull

Of magnet proportions

Connect two spirits

With individual absorption    

 

Reviews

[imagination101]

Spring forth
Set in motion
What the soul
Has been yearning for
Let two beings become
One whole

Now that states love to me!

[storiestotell]

Nice flow!
Enjoy the pull
Of magnet proportions
Connect two spirts
With individual absorption
That's what love should be like!

[Midnight Queen (Amanda)]

very well written

[mariah]

very well written and it had the rythem had a good pace.
-mariah

[BikerAngie]

absolutely beautiful write i could feel this one!

[Jeremy Baker]

I really enjoyed this!

[Nobody.]

Nice. Great images. Felt this one deeply.

Cheers!

[Cassie Fraga]

can relate to this write on more levels then one... very well written piece!!

[Gomer LePoet]

yes I know the feeling you speak of except it is a "her" face that I long to touch.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully penned cosmic approach to love. Lovely write. Nicely done!