Scribble Me Into Your World

Write me into a chapter

Of your intriguing life

Even if it is only

One line or two

 

Create one word

That has meaning

That only I shall know

Letting a bright smile

Form on these lips

In the euphoric afterglow

 

Scribble me into

A place within your

Intriguing beating heart

So I know not all

Was in vain

 

Tattoo me onto

Your paper of life

Letting world know

That I am a friend

And am real

So that I can

Accept how I feel

 

Find a place

For me to fit

Within your amazing

Pages of your journey

And just once

Draw your hand holding mine

Reviews

[Poet Sayings]

such is the use of poetic form and convention to suggest differential
interpretation to words, expression to evoke emotive responses.
devices such as assonance, alliteration, onomatopoeia and rhythm,
you achieve a musical, incantatory effects, pure romance, loved this :)

[Jetta Zippora]

Fantastic write! :) So beautiful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

awesome write :-)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Simply stunning, well-expressive piece. Beautiful write.

[Mauricio Montoya]

like how this comes together all the way to the last line.

Draw your hand holding mine

love it!

[Arabdha]

lovely...filled with longing..powerful..passionate

[Sophistication]

Love the imagery and how you use your passion as a metaphor to connect romance. J'adore!

[storiestotell]

I felt a longing so deep of wanting just once to know that she belongs with him and that he loves her too. Thats what I get from the poem, the woman just wants to know his love is real.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a wonderful and enchanting invitation to intimacy ... thank you for sharing!

[Mary]

like this one too.