Deeper Still

My breast are full and large

For you touch they long

But deeper still my heart

Throbs to feel your song

 

My eager lips part

Licking delicately

But deeper still

They whisper

Your name silently

 

Eyes sparkle with fire

Scanning you with ease

But deeper still

My soul shines

Your name it breathes

  

Listen carefully

For those wispy words

That glide across the ether

Softly spoken in the night

The words I love you

Take a east bound flight

 

Reviews

Such a beautiful ode to the one you try to reach, and I feel the longing, the lost and pain. These stanza's are full with hope, and colorful meaning. Each new one, brings your spirit closer to that one. I really enjoyed this write.
It has an elusiveness I adore.

E.L.

[gabrielle]

That deeper longing to touch, to feel and to embrace a loved one made me think of a long distance relationship. sensual but elegantly penned.

[Poetic Beauty]

You hit the idea completely. Those deeper feelings beyond sexual ares the one that matter the most.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a haunting melody.. aching in the longing of soul to soul... Yes.. there is the touch of skin on skin, but deeper, oh so much deeper still, the purest passion of the heart's hunger within. So beautifully sensual and lifting.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Sexual contact I one thing deeper within is a love that trumps it all. Glad you saw the meaning.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Beautiful, PB. The sensitivity and sensuality of your words are captivating.

[Frieda P]

Oh this one tickles in that breath of wispy words, with some heat to it...can't say which stanza I prefer, I loved them all, nicely pen'd PB!

[Sami Khalil]

Delicately written, wonderfully conveyed...A beauty...:)...............

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Love is deeper than the physical connections

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:)......................

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a beautiful piece, filled with such romance, longing and emotion.
I loved the way it flowed, the rhyming was amazing and it had such beautiful meaning to it.
This was great keep writting :)