Vanilla Moonbeams

Oh spinners of dreams

Come weave your

Silvery scenes

With intricate patterns

And interlocking

Threads

 

Entwine

What is destine

With freelance

Love

That dances

Through time

Make our hearts

Combine

 

Twirl with precision

In the freedom

Of dreams

That sing ardent

Pleasures

And Eternal

Mastery

 

Embellish

This quiet heart

With ruby delight

Let the mango

Flavor

Sweeten this night

 

Oh spinners

Of romantic dreams

Weave me a tale

On vanilla moonbeams.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the use of sewing and weaving in this poem. Life is like a seamstress. Each decision we make allow us to create a pattern. Good and bad. I like the desire of romance in this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Jeremy Baker]

Great imagery - this is something you excel at. Just so easy to picture myself 'in' this narrative!

[PoppySilver]

This is tangibly inviting...I can feel the imagery! :) I like your poetry as it progresses :) A beautiful piece hon xoxo

[Joshua Randall]

Like weaving a spell : )

[storiestotell]

Nicely woven poem, took me on a nice trip.

[Tina Kline]

Very very beautiful. Spin me only joyful and positive dreams.

[Wondering Mind]

Hand-craft in word-craft!! Nice poetic skills here.

[Dark Poetry]

I like this poem, especially when you use the spiders spinners for your poem.

[Cassie Fraga]

love it!!! only a poet can yearn for dreams like this.... very good write indeed!!!

[Aianarie]

This is a beautiful flow of words. Nice work.

One thing though, MANGO? Personally, I think mangoes have a very unpleasant metallic taste.

lol. Just teasing. Great poem. :-)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautiful imagery and sweet loving piece. Nicely done