Firestorm

Firestorm

 

Firebrand full of

Malcontent

Pound fists

To the onyx

Sky

 

Chanting with vulgar

Veracity

A firestorm lighting the

Night

 

Destructive notations burn

Bright

Sizzling the cool

Air

 

We shall never cower

We must stand to

Fight

 

Sparks shower

Below

As an inferno

Rages

 

Government trying to

Control

As protests become

Courageous

 

An intense firestorm

Blazes

For freelance freedom

Is at stake  

Reviews

[Allmax]

Of malcontent, fist onyx.
Sky vulgar veracity.
The night burn bright.
Cool air cover to fight.
Shower below inferno rages.
To control become courageous.
Firestorm blazes freedom stake.

These are the last word of every line in you poem that Made this simple powerful poem. Awesome write, thank you for sahring... Allmax

[SUGATA M]

Superbly packaged

[Tina Kline]

A very riveting poem...calling the people to WAKE UP before its too late.

[Joshua Randall]

Awesome political writing

[Wondering Mind]

What a vey apt choice of words for this firey write!!

[Enigmatic Soul]

Very intense and raw, literally bursting with energy. Well written.

[Everett DeValle]

A deeply profound write, Beauty...I love your emotions in this poem. I commend you for speaking your voice in these tumultuous times. Nicely done.

[Aianarie]

Beautiful and strong, like fire itself. Excellent write.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great imagery and word play. Strong, intense piece. Nicely done

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!! **holds my fist up and waves it in the air** POWER!!!!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

"Government trying to
Control
As protests become
Courageous "
We best stand for freedom and less government before it is too late!'! I like the feel and the desire of this outstanding poem.
Coyote