Alive and in Awe

Inspired by a bike ride today, where the wind blew strongly across my body. I felt free, alive and carefree and enjoyed the soothing sensation immensely.

Tendrils of hair
fly wildly.

Lost in a succulent
sea of sensation.

Time is irrelevant,
ceases to exist.

Feeling infinitely
in awe and alive.

Author's Note

If you have any thoughts on this, I would like to hear them.
Any and all feedback is welcome. :)

Reviews

[Karmee]

very lovely write here,
most enjoyable.
awesome writing

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words.
"Lost in a succulent
Sea of sensation."
The above lines. Perfect. Good to become lost in the things that create pleasure. Thank you Amanda for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Polly]

This brought a fresh feeling as I read this piece, you've described your emotions well. :) I love bike rides too, especially when it's on an empty road and it's really fast. x)