Storm's Comin'

I know it!

There's a storm comin'
And I feel the wind blowin'
There's a storm comin'
Can't you feel the wind blowin'?
There's a storm comin'
Thunder is the sound of heart's pain
There's a storm comin'
Tears are gonna fall like the rain
There's a storm comin'
I can see it plain as day
There's a storm comin'
And this one's gonna blow me away.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The flow of words was very good. I can feel the storm too. A lot of people are feeling the pain and are getting tire of being put to the side. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[RareRed]

I totally heard a song in that!!! I can totally see that as the chorus to a song!

[Niki]

wow i liked it seems like it had a melody going underneath like a lullaby.

[mattavelli]

Hey, get indoors. :)
Great write, I like the rhyme and the flow of it is great!
Take care

[Rain]

Omigod..
I LOVED that piece. That's got music all through it. I haven't read the rest..I will, but I don't need, too. I'm a pretty good read of a mans soul/heart..and you're a brother. Rain..