Can You Feel It?

 

 

 

 

 

 

PICTURE FOUR:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can't resist the feeling;

the feeling we all desire.

 

We dream of this sensation

we wonder what it's like

we wish to understand it

we hope that we can have it

we live to understand it.

 

The ones beholding this treasure

are the luckiest people to inhabit the world.

And the ones without,

have never really lived.

Author's Note

I would really loveee to hear some thoughts on this. I'm not sure how I feel about it...

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

What a cute little piece. Very short, but to the point and just as complete as a four page poem on the same subject. :) Very glad you entered this in the "PLEASE EXPLAIN! 4" contest, and best of luck to you in it.
KH

[kurrupted]

wow!, this piece is awesome,
short but deep
well penned and thought provoking...LOVE is'nt it?, i really like the flow too and the stanzas connect so well...great!..the two large fond lines was also an added point to the coolness of the piece. nice write

[Tyler]

it means a lot. and it definitely is a treasure.

[Brandon]

Very nicely written. well done.

[Cortney Lynn]

oh my god kristine. this is just.... so good. i cant even say what i feel about it because its just perfect...


i'm gonna hang this on my wall so i can read it all the time.